Read the body paragraph from a personal statement. (1) since i live in the midwest, my fascination with the ocean might seem unusual. (2) i have my aunt to for sparking my interest in marine biology. (3) my family’s annual visits to her home are always great. (4) we visit the local beaches to study shells, seaweed, and ocean dwellers like crabs, clams, and jellyfish. which is the best sentence to revise to replace vague language? a. sentence 1 b. sentence 2 c. sentence 3 d. sentence 4 anwser is c. setence3

C.sentence 3 My family's annual visits to her home are always great.

This sentence is too vague. After reading the sentence, I think so what? So what if the visit's to your aunt's house are great? How does that have anything to do with your fascination of the ocean or your interest in marine biology. What about her home has anything to do with the topic of this personal statement? In order to fix this vague language, it's important to explain where her house is and what you mean by great.

the correct answer is

the

third option. in the excerpt from "why equal pay is worth fighting

for" by senator elizabeth warren, she supports her point by noting:

"for middle-class families today, it usually takes two incomes to get by.”

warren supported barbara mikulski’s the paycheck fairness act to combat wage

discrimination, as it would to ensure “that salary differences have

something to do with the actual job that they are doing, and not just because

they are women”.

yes yes it does !