In what way is dante’s universe orderly?

What is missing from the data dump outline for this body paragraph? a.provide 3rd example-data b.explain all data-warrant c.claim

Ineed simplifying this thesis and making it easier to understand for the reader (more concise) "no matter how religious one may be, one’s faith tends to change under unexpected and challenging circumstances."

What if the author had used “looked at” instead? punishment would be deemphasized. punishments would be seen as less harsh. the meaning wouldn't change.