Can someone please help me make my french poem a little less bad. 50 points - pls help

Bonjour !

Inscris !

Je suis une Japonaise,

J'aime les fleurs de cerisier

A la fin du printemps

Quand le vent balaie les branches

Ils sont comme des flocons de neige

Tombant sur le sol

Inscris !

Je suis anglais

Mes yeux ont la couleur du chocolat noir

Mes cheveux chatain foncé,

Bouclés ou en chignon

Je suis un vrai caméléon

Inscris !

Je suis allemand

J'ai une grande famille

Mes parents, mon frère et ma soeur

Un vrai bonheur !

bonjour !

ce chien "était""(être) noir et blanc.

le chien (s'appeler)   "s'appellait" fifi.

jean- ­luc (s'arrêter) "s'arrêta" quand il a vu que fifi était très petit.

fifi (approcher) "approcha" jean-­luc.

pendant que fifi (l'approcher) "l'approchait" jean-luc reculait.

fifi (avancer) avança peu à   peu.

jean-­luc (sortir) sorti un morceau de chocolat de sa poche.

il (ne pas avoir) "n'a pas eu " peur de ce petit monstre.

il (lui offrir) "lui offra" le morceau de chocolat.

fifi (l'accepter) "l'accepta" .

answer:

hello, after writing this text in french i have to translate it into english. to those who will take the trouble to me.

before arriving at the museum, we notice a charming alley, with its stream, breathtaking greenery, hundred-year-old trees, ducks and geese, sculptures of different themes.

this museum takes up the entire history of electricity from its beginning to the present day, we appreciate the exhibitions and the references to those who were the first to master electricity and exhibit many ancient instruments of electric hope. many films and audio recording available to explain the operation of the devices and each and translated into 3 languages. (english, french, german). the explanations are simple and can be understood even by a young audience. many games and experiences are available for self-made throughout the visit. the animation around static electricity is well done and generally delights children. there is also the "nostalgia" part in which we can find the household appliances of our youth, that of our parents, or even our grandparents. the setting is warm, informative and entertaining. the museum is quite well done in all. it provides useful knowledge about electricity.

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