Hi, can somebody with a lot of french knowledge correct me? I need to have 6 sentences total where I describe what I, a family member, and me and my friend did last summer. And it has to be past tense. This is what I came up with... ?
HELP!!

L'été dernier, j'ai voyagé en Suisse. J'ai rendu visite à beaucoup de membres de ma famille.

Mon frère s'est également rendu en Suisse. Il a mangé beaucoup de nourriture.

Mon ami et moi nous sommes revus après mon retour. Nous sommes allés à la plage tous les jours.

Hi,So i read your Sentences and they are explaining you and your brother going to Switzerland if i am correct.?(So i will  give a example of some french sentences of you visting your family exactly.)

Explanation:

L'été, mon frère et moi sommes allés en Suisse pour rendre visite à notre famille.

Lorsque nous nous sommes assis pour manger, mon frère a mangé presque toute la nourriture, ce qui était drôle.Une fois l'été terminé, j'ai pu revoir mon amie.  

Après le temps passé de notre voyage en Suisse, mon ami et moi sommes allés à la plage presque tous les jours et j'étais heureux d'être son ami.

What it says is "On the summer me and my brother went to Switzerland to visit our family.When we sat dowm to eat my brother ate almost all the food which was funny.After our summer was finished i got to see my friend again.I missed her so much.After time passed from our trip to Switzerland me and friend went to the beach almost every single day and i was happy to be her friend."

I hope this helped you!

I read your sentences there great, you should had something to it so its not so plain like you had a great time or something like that here you go-

L'été dernier, j'ai voyagé en Suisse. J'ai rendu visite à beaucoup de membres de ma famille et j'ai passé un très bon moment.

Mon frère a également voyagé en Suisse avec moi, il a mangé beaucoup de nourriture.

Mon ami et moi nous sommes revus après mon retour. Ensuite, nous sommes allés à la plage tous les jours.

hope this helps

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this commercial passage is a real success. all the shops are great! there is a small biocoop to out with bio from quality, a well-known pastry chef, a wine seller, an italian brasserie offering midday meals on a superb terrace where the dishes are plentiful, the food is quality, the ice creams are made by the owner early in the morning and a very nice bookstore located in a pleasant setting and out of time. the highlights are relevant and well presented, we feel a real expertise on the part of booksellers and not just a desire to sell. lesrayons are filled with beautiful things for young and old. and very lively. you wouldn't think you were in strasbourg. an ideal place to spend delicious moments around a good coffee, a typical italian dish, a trendy pastry shop while reading a good book bought in the bookstore.

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that makes no sense