French ! ples

my family is made up of my dad, my mom and me. the choirs mostly fall on me when they got sick. cooking has to be my favorite of all of them. my mom usually deals with dusting and organizing. my dad takes care of his garden and study. it’s not to bad and it’s nice to .

Ma famille est composée de mon père, de ma mère et de moi. Les choeurs tombent surtout sur moi quand ils tombent malades. La cuisine doit être mon préféré de tous. Ma mère s'occupe habituellement du dépoussiérage et de l'organisation. Mon père s'occupe de son jardin et étudie. Ce n'est pas mal et c'est agréable d'aider.

Hi, french is my first language! Everything in your text is good, but I would change "chœurs" for "corvée" maybe... and when you say "la cuisine" that means 'the kitchen" if you want to say "cooking" you should probably use the word " cuisiner" which is the verb... and if you want to say "dusting", "époussetage" would maybe be a better word than "Dépoussiérer" and for "study" I would suggest the word "bureau" if you mean "of his office " and not "of his studies (meaning homework)" because "étudie" means study like analyze hope this helps...

It depends : )
if the narrator participates in the story (it’s a character of the story) then yes.
but if the narrator does’nt participate in the story (the narrator does not have a character) then no.