How to rewrite the preamble of the constitution
"we the people of the united states, in order to form a more perfect union, establish justice, insure domestic tranquility, provide for the common defense, promote the general welfare, and secure the blessings of liberty to ourselves and our posterity, do ordain and establish this constitution for the united states of america."

"The American people, in order to form a government superior to others, will work in favor of justice, domestic tranquility, common defense and the general welfare; with the aim of guaranteeing the blessings of freedom for citizens and their descendants and so they establish this constitution for the United States of America. "

Explanation:

The paragraph has been rewritten in a cohesive and coherent manner, capable of retaining the meaning of the original text and using simple but objective language that is capable of conveying concrete meaning and allowing the reader to understand the message being conveyed.