Which of the following is the best revision of the inflated language example below?
After cautious consideration of the varying alternatives, my
spouse and I determined that a 15-year mortgage would be
a superior selection to a mortgage with greater longevity.
A. After carefully looking at the options, we decided that a 15-year
mortgage would be better than one with a longer commitment.
B. My spouse and I - after cautious consideration of the options -
decided that a long-term mortgage would not be as good as a 15-
year mortgage
C. We made the decision to sign a 15-year mortgage instead of
committing to one with greater longevity.
D. None of the above