Hi can someone plsss help me check my essay because I kinda wrote a little too much (417) than the maximum (400) amount of words. Please make any suggestions that will help decrease the wording. (My teacher says that the highlighted part needs to be reduced but I’m not really sure how to) but either way if there’s anything that needs to be reduced (or even add) for the whole essay again please let me know!!!

The princes of europe believed that they were no longer obligated to remain under the authority of the church. the idea of another christian church, one outside of the pope's authority, had financial appeal as well. many european leaders began to seize church property and place it under the authority of the state. based on the text, why did another christian church appeal to european princes? it would allow them to make religious decisions. it would give them authority over people. it would allow them to expand their lands. it would allow them to influence the pope.

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