Read the following paragraph and talk with a partner about where the author should have used commas. Add the commas with a pen.
In the beginning of her story Kessa is a normal 15-year-old. She has many talents
especially dancing. She has danced for many years and loves it. One day her dance
teacher tells her to continue eating right but maybe lose a few pounds. Once kessa hears
this she takes things too far. Instead of cutting down on snacks and junk food she decides
to not eat at all. She does not eat breakfast lunch or dinner. Her new eating habits
continue and she begins losing weight. One after another she loses the pounds, and her
body becomes slimmer and slimmer. She loses weight to a point where she is extremely
unhealthy. (The Best Little Girl in the World, By Joanna)