(1) Last spring I went to visit my aunt and uncle who live in Valencia, Spain. (2) While I was there, I saw the festival called Las Fallas—which means the fires. (3) During the festival, the people in town lit fireworks and firecrackers. (4) Then, at the end of the festival, the town had a parade with floats made from paper, cardboard, and wood. (5) People filled the large floats with fireworks. (6) At the night's end, people lit the fireworks and burned the giant floats. (7) The experience was incredible. (8) The town's people took many precautions to make sure it was safe for everyone. (9) We saw many different things. (10) My favorite part about the festival was when the citizens voted to pardon one float from burning. (11) The town put the "pardoned" float in a museum with floats from past parades.
Which of these replacements for sentence 9 provides more specific details?