1. Someone in your peer review group says that a story needs more details about the setting. How could you build on her comment in a way that helps the writer make the story better?

The comment should be: "The scenario of your story lacks details. This should be modified, because it does not promote the reader to see an image that identifies the location where the story takes place. To create these details, you must bet on a descriptive language where you use many adjectives to explain the scenario in detail, I believe it will make your text richer and more appreciable. "

Explanation:

The comment must show the importance of detailing the scenario within a narrative and, in a polite way, should indicate how the colleague can do this in his or her text.

The importance of adjectives in setting details should be highlighted, because it is these adjectives that have the ability to create images for the reader and explain the entire setting of the story.

ya i know i wanna was a good night i wanna was a good night i love y’all bye is your address again call tomorrow morning i love ya bye hi hi i’m going crazy about going to the school and i don’t know if y’all want me or not going tomorrow and i’ll tell you what i’m doing and i’ll y’all with this i’m gonna was a really bad thing to say i don’t think i can but i’ll give ya my friend tomorrow night i love you and y’all so i don’t have a lot to say about you haha is this what time you should be home and i’ll give ya my number so i’m sorry i’ll call y’all bye love ya hey

try something like republic or democracy joined or something because its talking about a election party.