Can someone give feedback and help me revise this... Hice un viaje a mexico el año pasado. Primero planeamos un viaje. Tenemos boletos para ir en crucero. Luego empacamos, mi madre organizó mi maleta. Toda mi familia fue en el crucero. Conmigo estaba mi tía, mi tío y dos primas. También mis abuelos y, por supuesto, mis padres. Viajamos en un increíble bote. Era muy grande. Nos bajamos del crucero en México y tuvimos una Aventura. Mi familia y yo estuvimos en el crucero durante 5 días de ida y 7 días regresando. Fue muy divertido.

I made a trip to mexico last year. We plan a trip first. We have tickets to go on a cruise. Then we packed, my mother organized my suitcase. My entire family was on the cruise. With me was my aunt, my uncle and two cousins. Also my grandparents and, of course, my parents. We travel in an incredible boat. It was too big. We got off the cruise in Mexico and had an Adventure. My family and I were on the cruise for 5 days out and 7 days returning. It was fun.

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in the dark you call me from the darkness you called me i recognized your voice you recognized my neighbor for here i said you where you are dad i do not see you here i am here and i am afraid you said not my son wait i have you where are you this dark i do not see anything i have fear do not be afraid, son, right now, i'm coming soon, papa, i'm waiting for you, a father cries out to his son