1) identify the correct sentence.

a.
on television it says vitamin a is good for your eyes.
b.
vitamin a good for your eyes.
c.
vitamin a is good for your eyes.
d.
they say vitamin a is good for your eyes.

2) identify the correct sentence.

a.
if someone has an extra ticket, give john.
b.
if someone an extra ticket, john give.
c.
if someone has an extra ticket, she can give it to john.
d.
if someone has an extra ticket, you can give it to john.

1. A - On television it says Vitamin A is good for your eyes.  

2. D - If someone has an extra ticket, you can give it to John.  

to gain popularity at school, fitzgerald wrote plays for the school and cast himself as the star. he also joined one of the universitys most prestigious clubs.

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.