50points no trolls i need to make the paragraph below more fluent and work on my sentence fluency can anybody ?
you see if one-person smokes, the whole building smokes, regardless of whether they are the one holding the cigarette or even in the same apartment. in a multifamily building, the families with nonsmokers are affected just as much as the ones that have smokers in them. smoking puts those people at risk for so many things. children and adults alike are then at risk for a list of chronic and fatal diseases. so even if you don't think secondhand smoke will give your loved ones the "unheard of' diseases," you now know that it can cause cancer. would you give your loved one's cancer just for a short moment of euphoria?

This thinning would materially change the sound of the drum, evidence that although it might continue to be used for its original purpose of music-making or calling people to arms, it would now do so with a different voice. a musical instrument had become a trophy, and the new carvings were in fact branding, a statement of the north’s political dominance over central africa and of allegiance to islam.the drum had come to khartoum at a critical moment in sudanese history. in an audio version, stressing the word "branding" would do what for the listener? emphasize the word's importance and the idea that followsadd emphasis to the following sentencesignal that something important has just been repeatedadd emphasis to the preceding sentence