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Your essay should include • An attention-grabbing introduction with a thesis statement. • At least three body paragraphs with topic sentences and supporting information from the readings. • A conclusion that summarizes the main points of the essay and encourages your reader to think critically about its topics. • Points of comparison that focus on imagery and/or tone and are organized through a point-by-point or block structure. • Transitions that indicate the similarities and differences between subjects. • At least five of your vocabulary terms used correctly in the text of the essay. • An academic tone. Your final draft should be free from mechanical and grammatical errors, including spelling, capitalization, and punctuation.

should zoo exist?? (topic)

Explanation:

There is no doubt that many animals are in a bad condition and some zoos don't keep animals in their natural habitat but nevertheless, zoos are very important and we are going to go through all of the things to prove zoos should exist.

       first of all, it is important to understand that 'zoo haters' aren't zoos haters, they hate bad zoos not good ones; and sometimes they don't even realize that themselves and we have to agree that some zoos are harsh and are very easy to attack but those are bad zoos and confidently the same types of zoos that zoo haters hate and we totally understand that 'some' zoos are harsh but those are the bad ones, what about the good ones? the ones that are more rescue centers than zoos?  

       For now, let's say that we agree. Of course we don't but let's think we all did think that zoos should not exist; well at least the bad ones and we successfully close all zoos and free the animals in the wild. What do you think will happen? Will animals live freely and happily? and yes they will be free but they will be more confused than happy. you see that most animals in the zoos were born there and were raised to live there. their entire life they have been receiving food and treats from humans without any of the animal's efforts and when they will be released in the wild, they won't survive a week because they wouldn't know how to hunt, how to protect and defend themselves. there even have been cases when predators don't know where 'meat' comes from.

         Zoos just don't keep the animals safe but they also help prevent a specific species from being extinct. Many animals are on their last hopes from being extinct and zoos are doing a good job taking in these animals and breeding them to increase their population so they don't go extinct.

        in conclusion, i do agree with zoo haters that many zoos don't care about animals and they only care about money but on the bright side, most of those zoos are changing into better ones and also i would like to mention if you are a zoo hater and you don't agree with us, we totally respect your opinion but we would not like it if you claim to hate zoos and then you try to convince people  zoos are bad. take actions yourself, if you think zoos are bad so don't visit them or support them and try avoiding visiting harmful zoos and this is e a and it was my solemn duty to tell you this and i hope i did it well and changed a little bit of your view towards zoos.

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.

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