Read the paragraph.

Volunteering is a good way to gain skills and work experience. In a recent study, seventy-three percent of employers said they’d hire someone who’d volunteered. Among employees who had volunteered, ninety-four percent said that they’d seen benefits at work. Students looking to improve their resumes should consider volunteering.

Which is the best way to revise the final sentence?

The transition “in fact” should be added to the beginning of the sentence to show the similarity among ideas in the paragraph.
The transition “as a result” should be added to the beginning of the sentence to sum up the argument in the paragraph.
A quotation should replace the sentence to further support the argument in the paragraph.
A fact should be added to the sentence to further support the argument in the paragraph.

judy jones is an attractive woman who receives attention from many men throughout the story.   despite her beautiful appearance, she is superficial and callous.   she is an aggressive woman who goes after any man she desires but she is not happy.   she is fickle and is never satisfied.   her beauty is only skin deep.   dexter breaks down because he knows his dreams are unattainable.   he believes that wealth and physical beauty are what will make him happy.   he soon realizes that she has lost her attractive looks.   it is not all what he had planned.

no its not a run on sentence however i think you meant wet suits not sours also a run on sentence would be like surfers surf all winter long in southern california by using wet sours to keep them warm and the live their all year long  

what are the choices and the passage take a picture

d. lennie pats too hard, and then panics.