Add or remove apostrophes where appropriate. There are 4 errors to be corrected. College students’ are to be offered year-long work experience positions in developing countries under plans to link the UK's domestic policies with parts of the nation’s foreign aid budget. “Until recently,” say’s Janice Geller, a spokeswoman for the Department of International Finance, “British youngsters’ had been expected to raise a minimum of £800 towards the costs of the scheme, but in the future that sum will be waived.”

College students are to be offered year-long work experience positions in developing countries under plans to link the UK's domestic policies with parts of the nation’s foreign aid budget. “Until recently,” says Janice Geller, a spokeswoman for the Department of International Finance, “British youngsters had been expected to raise a minimum of £800 towards the costs of the scheme, but in the future, that sum will be waived.

removed 3 apostrophes and added a comma

the sentence does not violate the phrase structure second rule (introduced by noam chomsky) because noun phrases consist of a determiner such as a, the or every, and a noun. in the sentence, the noun phrase the cake includes a determiner (the) and a noun (cake).

on the other hand, the first rule indicates that a sentence encloses a noun phrase, followed by a verb phrase. the example sentence can be analysed as follows:

john (n) + ate (v) + the (det) + cake (n).