using linking words how to correct- At the fair, not only can I eat tasty food, but I can also see awesome fireworks.

At the fair I can eat tasty food and I can also see some awesome fireworks.

Explanation:

Note :The linking word is and .

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use the headings to create an overview of the main points.

third person

explanation:

note the usage of names and pronouns, "james" & "the old man". this alone can confirm it as third person, as first person uses "i" and the like, while second person uses "you" and the like.

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