need help with these question's. correct the following dangling constructions by rewriting the sentence's Q1: Being naturally shy, Dates Became a burden to me Q2: Looking north, our ranch can easily be seen. Q3: While climbing to the roof, the ladder slipped and made me fall. Q4: By ignoring him, Johnny stopped having tantrums. Q5: Having been eaten by gophers, Dad set a trap by the chrysanthemums. Q6: At the age of nine, Don's father died of a cerebral hemorrhage Q7: To sew properly, a pattern should be followed. Q8: To achieve success in any field, perseverance must be maintained. Q9: By arriving at the fair early, the winning entries can be seen.

Dangling constructions are parts of sentences that are located in the wrong position and therefore mislead the reader that they refer to something else other than what the author intended.

Q1. Dates became a burden to me, as I was naturally shy.

The way the original sentence was written, it would seem that 'dates' are naturally shy, and not 'me.'

Q2. Our ranch can easily be seen if you look north.

The way the original sentence was written, it would seem that the 'ranch' was performing the action of looking north.

Q3. While I was climbing to the roof, the ladder slipped and made me fall.

If you add the pronoun I, you will make sure that you were the one climbing to the roof and not the ladder.

Q4. By being ignored. Johnny stopped having tantrums.

If you make Johnny the object of being ignored, you will avoid a dangling construction.

Q5. Dad set a trap by the chrysanthemums because they were eaten by gophers.

The way the original sentence was written, it would seem that 'Dad' was eaten by gophers, and not the flowers.

Q6. When Don was nine, his father died of a cerebral hemorrhage.

The way the original sentence was written, it would seem that Don's dad was nine years old when he died.

Q7. To sew properly, you should follow a pattern.

It's important to write who will be performing the action.

Q8. To achieve success in any field, you must maintain perseverance.

The same as the previous sentence.

Q9. By arriving at the fair early, you can see the winning entries.

The same as the previous sentence.  

the rhetorical technique most used in this excerpt is parallelism. parallelism is a technique which author used in sentence as substitute of repeated synthetical similarities. it is the effect of rhetorical technique.

explanation:

the anecdote makes readers feel sorry for the man’s lack of heritage, then reminds readers that the man has an equally valuable heritage.