Hi. I have to revise my conclusion, but I don't know what to. Could you please help me? :) Here it is:
In brief, video games are not harmful to adolescents because it expands interests to participate, and it expresses the player’s emotions. Many others may disagree with this and will continue to stand by their point, but video games can teach kids to make good decisions, and to give people opportunities, or to give them a push to doing what they enjoy. Video games are great for every kid, even if they are the ones just watching.

"and these i address to all females that would be married, or are already so; not that i suppose their sex more faulty than the other, and most to want advice, for i assure [women], upon my honour, i believe the quite contrary; but the reason is, because i esteem them better disposed to receive and practice it, and therefore am willing to begin, where i may promise myself the best success." this statement from franklin's "rules and maxims for promoting matrimonial happiness" best demonstrates his use of criticism to argue his point his use of common sense to appeal to women his use of flattery to gain women's attention his use of facts to prove his point