Which sentence needs revision to make its meaning clear? A
Rounding the bend, the two racers appeared tied for first place.

B
On her way home, Alana found the man’s broken bicycle.

C
We saw a beautiful sunset having a picnic on the hillside.

D
We handed water in large cups to the tired firefighters.

Ipronounced his name, offering him at the same time my hand: he took it, smiling and saying, “we shall do very well by-and-by.” then he laid me down, and addressing bessie, charged her to be very careful that i was not disturbed during the night. having given some further directions, and intimates that he should call again the next day, he departed; to my grief: i felt so sheltered and befriended while he sat in the chair near my pillow… (chapter 3) this passage, in which jane first meets the doctor, is an example of