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If I can teach in private school I would want the private school to be a huge and very well designed building, inside and out. I would make sure that my students I teach are very educated and understand what i teach them. The subject that I would like to teach will have to be English. I prefer English because it will be very easy to teach and my students will not have a hard time learning this subject. I would love for my students to leave my classroom with good manners and  will act appropriate. If i see that my students are working super hard on Fridays I will make it an entertainment day. The only way for them to earn their Fun Friday is if they do their work, be polite, and ask for help when needed. As a teacher i would like for other teachers to be comfortable when they are around me. If a teacher speaks to me I will make sure I am clearly listening and understanding what they are trying to say. If any of the other teachers have a problem i will try anything i can to help them out with their situation.

Explanation: You had a few grammar issues but i corrected them for you.

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

when reagan refers to freedom in this passage, he uses repetition as a rhetorical device. repetition is when the same words or phrases are repeated few times to make an idea stronger and more unforgettable. in this case, when he talks about freedom, he starts the sentence whit this word followed by a verb in present simple and after an advantage of being free.

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