Tension piece of writing pls i need it asap

      It's been forever since I've been in this house. Iscolated back in the woods, child hood memories locked up in it. Not ever coming out. The leaves crunch while I walk. My muscles tense and frigid. My stomach stiring up something...that I will probably regret. Why am Iso scared to go in here? I look at it. Broken floor boards. It's so quiet I can hear the blood roar in my ears. Anticipating. I feel like I am prey...waiting to be pounced on, but, I'm not sure why? I fumble with my hands as the dark shadows of the house loomed over me. My breath is a fog in the wind. My hair wisps against my ears. I step on to the wooden step. It barely breaks through. One disrupt sound in the forest. I take a breath, and walk in.

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amaterasu is my sister! wow so rude!