If anything is wrong with this, can someone help a fellow guy out

it needs a colon after contained and take the apostrophe off of zucchini

For number 1 there should be a comma after novel and after Twist inside the parentheses. (The novel, "Oliver Twist," was written by Charles Dickens.) For number 2 there should be no apostrophe for "zucchini's". It should be zucchinis or just zucchini (both are plural). For the last one there should be a comma after yard inside the parentheses. ("I don't have anything to put in the yard," Charlotte complied to John.

Explanation:

because most jews were in the concentration camps and dying horrible deaths while anne could be with her family in a warm place with shelter, food, water, and a place to sleep.