What kinds of problems should be corrected in the following paragraph during local revision?
The story Little Red Riding Hood is a fairy tale that has a moral to be told.
When Little Red Riding Hod stops to talk to the wolf that she does not know,
she makes the mistake of talking to a stranger this lack of caution puts her in
danger later in the story she finds the wolf waiting for her the moral of the
story is that one should not talk to strangers.

The story Little Red Riding Hood is a fairy tale that has a moral to be told. When Little Red Riding Hood stops to talk to the wolf that she does not know, she makes the mistake of talking to a stranger. This lack of caution puts her in danger. Later in the story, she finds the wolf waiting for her. The moral of the story is that one should not talk to strangers.

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1.   in sonnet 18, the speaker wants to describe the beauty of his love, but can’t find the words to do so. the speaker says “then in mid-utterance the lay was lost” when he tries to think of the words to describe his love’s beauty.   through his defeat of finding words to describe his love, he shows his love for her.

2.   instead of describing how perfect his love is or comparing her to other beautiful things, he says she is average and there is nothing special about her.   at the last 2 lines of the poem, the volta changes the poem by saying that even though his love is average in beauty, his love for her is special and unique. so instead of praising her throughout the whole poem, he contrasts her average characteristics with his special love for her.

3.   the beloved asked the speaker to describe how he feels about her. she begins to describe what she feels but "drop the torch" and says that she can't do it because the words "hid in me out of reach." the the speaker says "nay, let the silence of my womanhood command my woman-love to thy belief" and that her silence will have to be the answer to his question.