(9) Self-control also fails when it is tired. (10) You only have so much of it What is the best revising comment to make to a classmate about sentences 9 and 10?
The sentences are choppy and should be combined.
Sentence 9 is off topic and should be deleted.
Sentence 10 is a fragment and should be corrected.
The sentences are fine the way they are.

9

Explanation:

according to the options stated, the one that is correct is the second option. the author most likely includes the panel to hint at the strong bonds among his family members. besides, the image from art spiegelman’s maus is common to show and portray the innocence and naivete of the children during the holocaust as well as the fact that millions of innocent jews were rounded up and taken by train to camps.