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English, 24.05.2021 14:00 sherlock19

Hello Hell, I'm not English, I'm French, so can somebody correct my faults (short txt) and sure make better it please ? the subject is "shopping addiction", and I will do a vocal but first it should be correct, right ? Thank
Hello, I'm Inci and today, I'm going to tell you more about my shopping habits. First, I shop with my mom most of the time and sometimes alone. Next, I can go shopping at any time free, there is no specific day to have fun! Because shopping is fun. After that, sure I need sometimes some items such as school supplies, books. Yet I accept, I usually buy items lots of things even if they don't match my needs, just because I like and I want, so I buy: clothes, but even more bags, accessories, especially earrings when I already have plenty of them.
What is more, I won't grow taller, so I can't lie about the clothes or the shoes. I admit I like shopping.
Besides, I have a tendency to art. I collect wonderful things: pieces that date back to centuries, Alsatian newspapers from the beginning of the 20th century, postcards from all over the world ... Recently I paid dearly for an authentic painting from the 20th century. Well, it's my father who pays, but that's what I'm very attracted to by this kind of thing and I spend a lot of it.
Furthermore, on average I can say that I can spend 200 euros per week ...
Eventually you might think I’m a shopaholic but I often sort my stuff, I donate clothes. Besides, I give gifts of my paintings and my statuettes… and I buy a lot of eco conception clothes, I like to join the good of our planet.
To conclude, I can be a sparing shopaholic!

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