What is the single most important problem that should be addressed in this introductory paragraph during global revision?
I believe that a good school start time should be the same time that it is right
now. Seven twenty-five in the morning might be early, but it's convenient.
Many students complain that they don't get enough sleep because school
starts too early. Studies show that lack of sleep makes the learning process
that much harder. It seems that a later start time would allow students to get
the rest they need. As a result, students would learn better.
A. Paragraph development
B. Spelling
c. Thesis
D. Organization