English ! read both paragraph than answer the 2 questions

poe's original letter to rufus griswold.
my dear griswold, new-york. feb. 24. 1845
soon after seeing you i sent you, through zeiber, all my poems worth re-publishing, & i presume they reached you. with this i send you another package, also through zeiber, by burgess & stringer. it contains in the way of essay “mesmeric revelation” which i would like to go in, even if something else is omitted. i send also a portion of the “marginalia,” in which i have marked some of the most pointed passages. in the matter of criticism i cannot put my hand upon anything that suits me—but i believe that in “funny” criticism (if you wish any such) flaccus will convey a tolerable idea of my style, and of my serious manner barnaby rudge is a good specimen. in “graham” you will find these. in the tale line i send you “the murders in the rue morgue” and “the man that was used up”—far more than enough, you will say—but you can select to suit yourself. i would prefer having in the “gold bug” to the “murders in the r. m,” but have not a copy just now. if there is no immediate hurry for it, however, i will get one & send it you corrected. write & let me know if you get this.—i have taken a 3d interest in the “broadway journal” & will be glad if you could send me anything, at any time, in the way of “literary intelligence.”
truly yours.
poe

griswold’s version of poe’s letter as published in the preface of his “memoir” of poe.
february 24, 1845
my dear griswold: —a thousand for your kindness in the matter of those books, which i could not afford to buy, and had so much need of. soon after seeing you, i sent you, through zieber, all my poems worth re-publishing, and i presume they reached you. i was sincerely delighted with what you said of them, and if you will write your criticism in the form of a preface, i shall be greatly obliged to you. i say this not because you praised me: everybody praises me now: but because you so perfectly understand me, or what i have aimed at, in all my poems: i did not think you had so much delicacy of appreciation joined with your strong sense; i can say truly that no man’s approbation gives me so much pleasure. i send you with this another package, also through zieber, by burgess & stringer. it contains, in the way of essay, “mesmeric revelation,” which i would like to have go in, even if you have to omit the “house of usher.” i send also corrected copies of (in the way of funny criticism, but you don’t like this) “flaccus,” which conveys a tolerable idea of my style; and of my serious manner “barnaby rudge” is a good specimen. in the tale line, “the murders of the rue morgue,” “the gold bug,” and the “man that was used up,”—far more than enough, but you can select to suit yourself. i prefer the “g. b.” to the “m. in the r. m.” i have taken a third interest in the “broadway journal,” and will be glad if you could send me anything for it. why not let me anticipate the book publication of your splendid essay on milton?
truly yours,
poe

consider the changes griswold made to poe’s letter, and answer the following questions:
• how do the changes reflect bias? (5 points)
• how does poe appear to the reader in griswold’s letter compared to the original?