Thesis do you think kids should be able to bring their cellphones to school? well in new york city, they are going to reverse the ban of students having their cell phones in school. the ban was implied by the bloomberg administration in 2006 but, mayor bill de blasio defended the policy change, thinking that it was important for kids to easily contact their parents. do you think more counties will do the same? thesis question; do you think more counties will do the same? answer plzzz

to eliminate ambiguous remote or broad reference it is necessary to focus on anaphoric reference. by definition "anaphoric reference means that a word in a text refers back to other ideas in the text for its meaning." the references should be clear and leave no room for ambiguity.

in the first case the pronoun it probably refers to the car but it has not been mentioned before so we should replace it for the car. in doing so the statement becomes clear.

in sentence number   two   the pronoun he refers to charles dickens the author. yet, the first half of the sentence is about the book a tale of two cities. to repair this it would be better to rephrase the first half : after i read   a tale of two cities by dickens, he so as to remove the remote reference.

you didn't finish the sentence , how am i gonna you if you didn't finish the sentence