That good but it about a story how to fix the world it be like black power, stop the violence in a story this be write about a cause you would rally for why65 point

just write about something that you are really passionate about and give reasons on why and how it could be changed

then its a law the end

judaism, christianity and islam, are all abrahamic religions and therefore have in common the hebrew idea of a single god which is the source of all morality. the idea of the covenant is only related to judaism, while dharma is a concept of indian religions and the four noble truths are basic principles of buddhism.