What is the purpose of this essay? To show that life in the big city is better than life in the country to write about different kinds of lifestyle choices to write about the benefits of living in the country to show the differences between city life and country life

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However, we can help you by commenting that most of these essays are written to know the different kinds of lifestyle choices in the country or in the city, citing the advantages and disadvantages of each one.

The reality is that living in the country or in the city is not good or bad per se, it is just a matter of what your necessities are and your personal preferences.

If you like living in the city because of the business, entertainment, services, and its many possibilities; or your job and kids' school, then the city is your best options with all the good and bad things included.

On the other hand, if you have no kids, like the beauty and the solitude of the country, a quiet small town is the best option for you. With all the advantages and disadvantages.