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20. q: islam highly prized education and knowledge. name three achievements of the islamic kingdoms and explain.
one achievement was the growing equality of male and female. there is no child marriage except in certain tribes. the second achievement was with the house of wisdom, which was an institution dedicated to scholars from all over the world to come to and translate books. this was so these teachings and books would be preserved in many different copies. the third achievement was their irrigation techniques. some regions of islam were in the desert so water was often scarce. muslims developed different ways to store water such as underground wells.

every of the four river valley civilizations, religion played an enormous role in shaping and cultivating each civilization. this essay will briefly discuss how religion formed the river valley people’s government and view on geography. religion dictated how the peoples of the river valley civilizations managed government and geography.

            religious leaders played prominent roles in every river valley civilizations form of government. from ancient egypt and mesopotamia to china’s historic empire and the indus river valley, all the river valley civilizations had significant religious figures. in ancient egypt, the pharaoh was revered as a god and therefore was given his right as supreme governing authority in the eyes of the people. the elusive emperors of china gained there governing rights by a mandate of heaven creating long lines of dynasties until the common people of china felt the dynasty had lost the favor of the gods. chinese emperors were not only governing leaders but also the spiritual leaders of ancient china. mesopotamian and indus river valley priests were referred as has head officials who had vast amounts of authority in these two civilizations primitive forms of democracy. religion shaped the structure and social caste of the four river valley civilizations.

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