Review Logical Fallacies (authority, slippery slope, hasty generalization, popularity).

she learned to understand that physical beauty wasn’t as important as being a good person.

the god   the goddess of salt water, of fresh water   yet more powerful and perfect.

the sun warms our planet, and with the moon, creates the tides. the moon orbits the earth and in turn, the earth orbits the sun. because they appear to be the same size in the sky, the sun, earth and moon work together to create eclipses. when the moon is directly in between the earth and sun

she needs to add a conclusion summing up the entire essay along with an ending sentence to complete it all nicely.