Can yall correct the following sentence please : I was in so much pain, therefore i called my stepsister who was in college studying nursing before dropping out , then she came and i also took a pill & relaxed for a couple of minutes after I woke up she placed an icepack to ease my swelling. After hours have a pass of lighting, rain, strong breeze blowing the storm finally calmED down. Because of the this very deadly rain our house was destroyed, so we move to Miami, Florida to live with my aunts and cousins. Until we could have to get into a wonderful house to live in.